Thursday, March 31, 2011

School Uniforms :)

FCAs                                                                                 Sweta Patel
1.      Supporting details                                                         March 16, 2009
2.     Parallel structure                                                            English 6-1
3.     Sophisticated vocabulary                                               School Uniforms


Dear Dr. Richard O’ Malley,
          There’s always away to be different. “When we lose the right to be different, we lose the privilege to be free.” (Charles Evens Hughes, U.S Supreme Court Justice, 1925) Said by the board of Education students from grades K-12 will be required to wear school uniforms. If the school uniform passes school uniforms will have to be worn. The choice to have school uniforms will not be a wise decision; it will be unfair to have them. There are many reasons why school uniforms will not fit in Edison public schools. Freedom will be taking away for students, student’s sense of style will not be shown, and parent’s money will diminish.
There are many reason’s school uniform’s are infamous. Said by many parents there are too many expenses. There are way too many expenses when having school uniforms. You would only have to buy two-three uniforms but they would have to buy ten other outfits for outside of school. The expenses pile up and there is no money left for more important things that are needed. Eventually parents wouldn’t have a single cent left (economy) and won’t have money for anything. The problem with having school uniforms is the bills build up and there is no money left for other items that a needed to live.
          There is freedom in the U.S.A, isn’t there? Well since there is, students should have it too. Freedom will be taking away from students and they will not be able to wear what they want too. They will be able to have freedom out of school but out of school there are parents and don’t give them freedom anyways. It will be unwise for the school board to have uniforms and they don’t know yet but when they establish school uniforms students will be very upset. There won’t be freedom at all so students will feel isolated from wearing school uniforms.
All students should be able to express there sense of style in there own way, school uniforms won’t help. Students won’t be able to express there sense of style and won’t be able to be fashionable. Students will be unable to wear hats, scarves, and other accessories. Students will be able to be factionists out of school but not in school were they can show it off.  Clearly students won’t be able to show the fashionable outfits in school and will feel trapped in school uniforms.
          It is not the best choice to have mandatory school uniforms for students K-12. Edison public school student K-12 does not need to be isolated from others.  There freedom taking away, also too many expenses for parents to pay, and students can’t express there sense of style that will be washed away from school uniform. Not thinking about parents, and students, will be unwise and if we think about them we shouldn’t have school uniforms.
 

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