Thursday, April 28, 2011

Explanatory story

                     There was a boy and girl named Amy and Matt, they are both siblings. They go to school together and at lunch they sit together. "Hey Matt mom's and dad's anniversary is coming up on the 17th." Amy said as she ate her sandwich.
              " We should do something special something with excitement, after all it is there 20th anniversary."  It was a perfect plan and they had to get everything done before August 17th and it's already the 14th. Matt said "We should have a delightful pasta and bread sticks and chocolete ice-cream dinner." Amy thought to herself perfect! When Matt and Amy got home from school Amy went upstairs to do her homework while Matt stayed down stair and had a brief chat with his mom Sharon. " How was school today honey."
                "It was great. At lunch we had a talk about y yoo." Matt stop for a second before he spilled the surprise. " My what honey are you OK."
"Yeah I'm fine, we were talking about you job because I didn't know were you worked but Amy told me." The day before the surprise they planned to get everything they need for the special event. But how were they going to buy so many items without anybodies help. They couldn't ask there mom nor dad. "What should we do Amy we can walk all the way over there." Amy finally found out what to do! Her plan was jenius.
They decided to call there Aunt Megan. But there was a slight problem. "Why won't Aunt Megan pick up when we need her." Amy said in an upset voice. Then they decided to call uncle Jon. Uncle Jon pick up and came to get them they got all the ingrediants. They made everything set the table and when there lovely parents walked in... "Surprise happy 20th anniversary." There parents loved it and never will forget how genorous there kid are.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

" The function of education is to teach one to think critically. Intelligence plus character-- that is the goal of true education." (Martin Luther King Jr. 1929-1963)

You don’t have to be smart to be intelligent. You just need character, and think outside the box. Stated by Martin Luther King Jr., "The function of education is to teach one to think critically. Intelligence plus character- that is the goal of true education." To think outside the picture is thinking critically, and intelligence and character can get you real education.
       To make my baby cousin Jai, 5, learn the respect and care for others I teach him, to think critically. Since my cousin is young he doesn’t have a lot of manners so teaching him proper educate is the first step. Teaching how to be nice and respectful and share is just that. Also, he is a older brother, his younger brother Krish is only two years old so, I thought and if I teach Jai about manners and other things he will teach Krish too! Jai, and Krish both have lots of character, since they are so young they explore things so they learn facts making them intelligent. Said in the quote Intelligents, and character is true education, Jai and Krish both have that. 
Aslam Bin Laden is a very intelligent person. All though he is terribly bad and kills innocent people he thinks critically.  Thinking intelligently, and critically he send people that work for him in battle and killing so he is safe and his people ether die or go to jail. For example 9/11 the attack of the twin towers he was not in the plane his people were therefore he is a coward because he let those people die instead of himself. But then again his people were just as bad because they decide to do these things.   Sadly 9/11 killed many, many people and too think Bin Laden was actually satisfied with what he did.
     Anybody can be intelligent but not smart, just think of what Bin Laden did he is intelligent but not smart for the things he did. “I don’t know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody.” (Abraham Lincoln) Bin Laden thought he was please everybody in Pakistan he is a failure for thinking that wrong.  


Thursday, April 7, 2011

Smoking persuasive

There are many harmful things that can effect you body in bad ways and smoking is one of them. Smoking effects your body because of the ingredients in it such as nicotine. Nicotine is a harmful drug that causes the addiction for smokers. People may have a couple of great things to say about smoking but there are also thousands of horrible things. In the following paragraph you'll find out more about smoking and cigarette's.
There are so many reasons smoking is horrible. First reason is that you will get bad breath and yellow teeth. Smokers get yellow teeth and bad breathe because of the products in cigarette's. Also, there is no benefit of smoking. Many smokers say they smoke because it releases stress and for fun but they are ruining their bodies. In a recent poles of Herbert Hoover Middle School's sixth graders, 100% of students said there is no benefit of smoking. This is an good that they think this way because they don't want dirty teeth and a smelly breath.
The second reason smoking is bad is that is causes nasal and breathing problems. The problem with smoking more and more is that you can get asthma. In recent poles 25% of people said this is a big problem. Would you smoke if you would get breathing problems? You can also get mouth and lung cancer which can kill people over a period of time. Over 50% of people say this is the worst possible affect of smoking. This is partially correct because it can put smokers in horrible condition. Moreover, smokers can get heart disease which they can stay alive but suffer forever. Lastly smoking is bad because smokers can have financial problems. Cigarette's are a lot of dollars and can put some addicts in debt. Right now, some cigarette boxes like Marbolo cost more than $6.00 and many smokers have one pack a day. The average amount of money spent every year because of cigarettes is about 8,000 dollars. Why would you want to waste your hard earns money?
Smoking is a dangerous addiction in which poeple are harming their bodies. Smokers should not try to quit smoking automatically because they are only killing themselves this way. Quitting should be a slow process and smokers should get help from outside resources such as nicotine patches. Would people smoke if what happened in the inside of their body showed on the outside? Furthermore people may have there personal opinion about smoking but some day they will suffer or pass away because of it.