NJ ASK persective

I took the NJ ASK on May 8-12. The first two days were Language Art Literacy days. The first day there were three section. Two open-ended and one persuasive writing. It was very easy. The second day was Two open-endeds and Two writing pieces. It was quite hard. The writing prompts were hard everyone of the open -endeds were easy. One of them was stupid. It was a girl packed a sandwich and a piece of cake for lunch when she got to lunch there were only crumbs of her cake left what happened? Wasn't that stupid? And the other one was just hard. Honestly, I probably did a lot better in Math than English. I thought there was lots of writing.

Explanatory story

                     There was a boy and girl named Amy and Matt, they are both siblings. They go to school together and at lunch they sit together. "Hey Matt mom's and dad's anniversary is coming up on the 17th." Amy said as she ate her sandwich.

              " We should do something special something with excitement, after all it is there 20th anniversary."  It was a perfect plan and they had to get everything done before August 17th and it's already the 14th. Matt said "We should have a delightful pasta and bread sticks and chocolete ice-cream dinner." Amy thought to herself perfect! When Matt and Amy got home from school Amy went upstairs to do her homework while Matt stayed down stair and had a brief chat with his mom Sharon. " How was school today honey."

                "It was great. At lunch we had a talk about y yoo." Matt stop for a second before he spilled the surprise. " My what honey are you OK."

"Yeah I'm fine, we were talking about you job because I didn't know were you worked but Amy told me." The day before the surprise they planned to get everything they need for the special event. But how were they going to buy so many items without anybodies help. They couldn't ask there mom nor dad. "What should we do Amy we can walk all the way over there." Amy finally found out what to do! Her plan was jenius.

They decided to call there Aunt Megan. But there was a slight problem. "Why won't Aunt Megan pick up when we need her." Amy said in an upset voice. Then they decided to call uncle Jon. Uncle Jon pick up and came to get them they got all the ingrediants. They made everything set the table and when there lovely parents walked in... "Surprise happy 20th anniversary." There parents loved it and never will forget how genorous there kid are.

" The function of education is to teach one to think critically. Intelligence plus character-- that is the goal of true education." (Martin Luther King Jr. 1929-1963)

You don’t have to be smart to be intelligent. You just need character, and think outside the box. Stated by Martin Luther King Jr., "The function of education is to teach one to think critically. Intelligence plus character- that is the goal of true education." To think outside the picture is thinking critically, and intelligence and character can get you real education.

       To make my baby cousin Jai, 5, learn the respect and care for others I teach him, to think critically. Since my cousin is young he doesn’t have a lot of manners so teaching him proper educate is the first step. Teaching how to be nice and respectful and share is just that. Also, he is a older brother, his younger brother Krish is only two years old so, I thought and if I teach Jai about manners and other things he will teach Krish too! Jai, and Krish both have lots of character, since they are so young they explore things so they learn facts making them intelligent. Said in the quote Intelligents, and character is true education, Jai and Krish both have that. 

Aslam Bin Laden is a very intelligent person. All though he is terribly bad and kills innocent people he thinks critically.  Thinking intelligently, and critically he send people that work for him in battle and killing so he is safe and his people ether die or go to jail. For example 9/11 the attack of the twin towers he was not in the plane his people were therefore he is a coward because he let those people die instead of himself. But then again his people were just as bad because they decide to do these things.   Sadly 9/11 killed many, many people and too think Bin Laden was actually satisfied with what he did.

     Anybody can be intelligent but not smart, just think of what Bin Laden did he is intelligent but not smart for the things he did. “I don’t know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody.” (Abraham Lincoln) Bin Laden thought he was please everybody in Pakistan he is a failure for thinking that wrong.  

Smoking persuasive

There are many harmful things that can effect you body in bad ways and smoking is one of them. Smoking effects your body because of the ingredients in it such as nicotine. Nicotine is a harmful drug that causes the addiction for smokers. People may have a couple of great things to say about smoking but there are also thousands of horrible things. In the following paragraph you'll find out more about smoking and cigarette's.
There are so many reasons smoking is horrible. First reason is that you will get bad breath and yellow teeth. Smokers get yellow teeth and bad breathe because of the products in cigarette's. Also, there is no benefit of smoking. Many smokers say they smoke because it releases stress and for fun but they are ruining their bodies. In a recent poles of Herbert Hoover Middle School's sixth graders, 100% of students said there is no benefit of smoking. This is an good that they think this way because they don't want dirty teeth and a smelly breath.
The second reason smoking is bad is that is causes nasal and breathing problems. The problem with smoking more and more is that you can get asthma. In recent poles 25% of people said this is a big problem. Would you smoke if you would get breathing problems? You can also get mouth and lung cancer which can kill people over a period of time. Over 50% of people say this is the worst possible affect of smoking. This is partially correct because it can put smokers in horrible condition. Moreover, smokers can get heart disease which they can stay alive but suffer forever. Lastly smoking is bad because smokers can have financial problems. Cigarette's are a lot of dollars and can put some addicts in debt. Right now, some cigarette boxes like Marbolo cost more than $6.00 and many smokers have one pack a day. The average amount of money spent every year because of cigarettes is about 8,000 dollars. Why would you want to waste your hard earns money?
Smoking is a dangerous addiction in which poeple are harming their bodies. Smokers should not try to quit smoking automatically because they are only killing themselves this way. Quitting should be a slow process and smokers should get help from outside resources such as nicotine patches. Would people smoke if what happened in the inside of their body showed on the outside? Furthermore people may have there personal opinion about smoking but some day they will suffer or pass away because of it.

School Uniforms :)

FCAs                                                                                 Sweta Patel

1.      Supporting details                                                         March 16, 2009

2.     Parallel structure                                                            English 6-1

3.     Sophisticated vocabulary                                               School Uniforms

Dear Dr. Richard O’ Malley,

          There’s always away to be different. “When we lose the right to be different, we lose the privilege to be free.” (Charles Evens Hughes, U.S Supreme Court Justice, 1925) Said by the board of Education students from grades K-12 will be required to wear school uniforms. If the school uniform passes school uniforms will have to be worn. The choice to have school uniforms will not be a wise decision; it will be unfair to have them. There are many reasons why school uniforms will not fit in Edison public schools. Freedom will be taking away for students, student’s sense of style will not be shown, and parent’s money will diminish.

There are many reason’s school uniform’s are infamous. Said by many parents there are too many expenses. There are way too many expenses when having school uniforms. You would only have to buy two-three uniforms but they would have to buy ten other outfits for outside of school. The expenses pile up and there is no money left for more important things that are needed. Eventually parents wouldn’t have a single cent left (economy) and won’t have money for anything. The problem with having school uniforms is the bills build up and there is no money left for other items that a needed to live.

          There is freedom in the U.S.A, isn’t there? Well since there is, students should have it too. Freedom will be taking away from students and they will not be able to wear what they want too. They will be able to have freedom out of school but out of school there are parents and don’t give them freedom anyways. It will be unwise for the school board to have uniforms and they don’t know yet but when they establish school uniforms students will be very upset. There won’t be freedom at all so students will feel isolated from wearing school uniforms.

All students should be able to express there sense of style in there own way, school uniforms won’t help. Students won’t be able to express there sense of style and won’t be able to be fashionable. Students will be unable to wear hats, scarves, and other accessories. Students will be able to be factionists out of school but not in school were they can show it off.  Clearly students won’t be able to show the fashionable outfits in school and will feel trapped in school uniforms.

          It is not the best choice to have mandatory school uniforms for students K-12. Edison public school student K-12 does not need to be isolated from others.  There freedom taking away, also too many expenses for parents to pay, and students can’t express there sense of style that will be washed away from school uniform. Not thinking about parents, and students, will be unwise and if we think about them we shouldn’t have school uniforms.

 

Pillow Pets

   Many people think a goodnight sleep is invaluable, according to children the Pillow Pet is the new pillow to use. It opens into a full size pillow and closes into a cuddly pet. The pillow pet is the best pillow to use; you can use it every day. Also it can be a child’s new best friend. It is very fun to play with which will attract customers so you will get money. Pillow Pets are for kids all ages. These pets are comforting and help kids stay relaxed and go to sleep without fusing. These pets come in in six different designs they are, Dog, unicorn, ladybug, bumble, dolphins, and a frog.
The Pillow pet works like a pillow and a pet which will attract customers to buy this product which will help you. Many parents will spend their money on this product because kids will beg and beg for it. Pillow pet are very efficient in giving money to us. The money will help you so you should sponsor it.

Since the pillow pet is so fun to play with kids will want it and parent will have to buy it for them. Sponsoring this product will be the best thing to do. Kids will fall asleep exceedingly fast. Kids will fall asleep as soon as they hit the pillow it will lure people to buy it so that you will make profited. As you can tell the Pillow Pets will give you an extreme wealth.
The Pillow Pet is forty dollars each so the profit is raised. In recent study 49.5% of United States citizen bought a pillow, so think about how much money you can get. You’ll only get 25% of the profit but that’s a whole lot for how much we made. Let’s say you I made 100 dollars 25 dollars go to you, isn’t that great! Pillow Pets are fun to play with you can own one too. It is a great gift to give to children also giving you for earnings. Pillow Pets are used all day so that parents don’t have to play with them so parents will want to buy the product.

The Pillow Pet opens into a full size pillow and closes into a fuzzy animal. The Pillow Pet is the only pillow and stuffed animal you should sponsor. You will get lots of money from it and it will be an experience of a life time. The Pillow Pet is the most impeccable pillow every, you should support it.

Pillow Pets

Many people think a goodnight sleep is invaluable, according to children the Pillow Pet is the new pillow to use. It opens into a full size pillow and closes into a cuddley pet. The pillow pet is the best pillow to use, you can use it everyday. Also it can be a childs new best friend. It is very fun to play with which will atract customers so you will get money. Pillow Pets are for kids all ages. These pets are conforting and help kids stay relaxed and go to sleep without fusing. These pets come in in six different designs they are, Dog, unicorn, ladybug, bumble, dolpins, and a frog.

                 The Pillow pet works like a pillow and a pet which will attract costomers to buy this product which will give you a lot of money. Many parents will spend ther money on this product because kids will beg and beg for it. Pillow pet are very efficent in sending money to us. The money will help you so you should sponcer it. Since the pillow pet looks so fun to play so kids will want it and parent will have to by it for you. Sponcering this product will be the best thing to do.Kids will fall asleep well fast. Plese sponcer this.